(Stella running upstairs to Eunice)
(Loud Sobbing)
Eunice: Oh stella Darling, Stella Stella What on earths upset you like this, Its not that Stanley is it? i'll go downstairs right now..
Stella: No its not stanley its blanche.
Eunice: I knew that girl was trouble from day 1, now whats she done?
Stella: dont ask? ask what she hasnt done... Ohh Eunice.. ( Cries loudly )
Stella: She's shamed us , what will mama and papa think, they're probably looking down on us and thinking what happened to our daughters? One got married to a polack and gets beaten up every other day and the other just forgot all her values. Its my fault i always knew there was something wrong with her i should have stayed with her in belle reve maybe we wouldnt have lost it then. Maybe maybe maybe.
Eunice: good heavens girl, can you please tell me whats happening?
Stella: Hotel Flamingo
Eunice: Yess (cough) I've heard about that hotel.
Stella: Blanche stayed at that hotel for some time.
Eunice: Oh.
Eunice: Well you know people these days, always spreading rumours. you can...
Stella: (interupts eunice in a high pitch voice ) But is it a rumour?
Eunice: Ohh Stella darling you dont believe it now do you?
Stella: I dont know Eunice , i just dont know Blanche has always been a bit flighty and after a incident she did become more and more intrested in men, she couldnt think about anything but them.
Stanley: STELLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!? GET THAT SISTER OF YOURS OUT THE
TOILET BEFORE I KNOCK THE DOOR IN! IM SERIOUS.
Eunice: Go honey, you'd better go, quickly
Stella runs down
This is an energetic and well composed piece which shows evidence of some knowledge and understanding of the play and characters. I think it works in broad terms and I like the Stanley interruption at the end as this throws the scene into relief.
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Capital letters or lack of them used appropriately, punctuation especially apostrophes which are worryingly absent. These two areas would drop you a grade or more.