Monday, 30 January 2012

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imagine that while Stella is in hospital after having the baby, she writes an entry in her diary about how she feels about returning home to Stanley and Blanche. Write this diary entry in which Stella expresses her hopes and fears for the future. 

You should give careful consideration to your language choices and style. Write in dramatic form and dialogue suitable for the characters.


Dear diary,


It's a boy, My beautiful baby boy. What a beauty! I'm going to name him..john, billy.. No Ill let Stanley decide.
I miss him you know i really do, I wonder how he must have been without me. With Blanche. Alone. Stanley was very angry at her the other day. Although it wasn't Blanche's fault, she can get a tiny bit annoying sometimes. Always worrying about her looks and powdering herself. what if he does something to her
No i Mustn't think like that, Stanley loves me and he wouldn't do anything to hurt me, and anyway he doesn't pay any notice to Blanche anyway.
But what if… STOP IT 
My baby, he looks a bit like Stanley, junior stanley, You know he smiled at me twice today.
I will always keep him by me, never ever let him be away from me. i will be the best mum ever and Stanley will be the best father ever. 
and Blanche
well.. she'll be the best aunty ever.

3 comments:

  1. 12
    8

    Tendency towards the simplistic - brief and underdeveloped
    Some minor flaws in expression

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  2. WWW:Nice attempt to interpret Stella's way of writing and by referring to her personality.


    EBI-Not long enough to be given a grade.

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  3. WWW: You used a sense of form/genre
    Created a convincing sense of their character's voice
    Revealed sound knowledge of the text
    EBI:Produced very brief responses
    Produced writing that contained technical errors/flaws in expression

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